Characters! What Do I Think They Look Like?(This is what, the fourth post about them? :D )

So... This rolls around to another Characters! What Do I Think They Look Like? post. Here are today's four characters:

Name: Leanne Edmeire
Story: My NaNo Novel

Leanne is just as horrible as Isabella Thornton, but lacks the strong feminist approach that Isabella has. Leanne was unconsciously like Isabella, and she isn't as... flirty... as Isabella, because she is married to Auger. Leanne is a hard person to explain, but she is evil, I can assure you of that.

Name: Jake Kendell

Story: My NaNo Novel

Jake is like Archer mostly in looks, and only sometimes in actions. Jake's main motivation is to avenge his sister's death. In some ways, he(Jake) is mentally unstable, because he can only see the middle of the tunnel, not the end, if you get what I mean. 

Name: Avanda Kidran

Story: Return to Aelsu and my NaNo Novel

Okay, so Avanda wasn't meant to look like Rowena. She was actually made before I ever saw Ivanhoe. But, Avanda and Rowena do bear a startling resemblance.

Name: Erellon D'Avare

Story: Project ASKIO, Return to Aelsu, and my NaNo Novel

I'm going to start it out with this: Erellon does NOT have a mustache. Will does, but Erellon doesn't. Erellon has a lighter personality, though, and his personality does remind of my brother a little, though...

This ends my fourth Characters! What Do I Think They Look Like? post. I hope you enjoyed it!

Go on, comment. Tell me what you thought, and if you've read the stories about these characters, do these images match up with the ones in your mind?

If you haven't read my stories, you can find almost all of them at this link:

http://www.heedtheprophecies.com/theunderground/topic.php?id=2780&replies=2125

Thank you for reading!

-Author

Look below for an excerpt from my latest Work In Progress...

It's me, know far but not wide at the Author.

So... The title promises an adventure. A tale. My prologue. Just a warning, it isn't really that great of a prologue, so don't get too excited. I know I've been kind of bad at posting lately, but life has been busy, and full of great excuses NOT to post. :) So there is my excuse... Now, I'll bet you really want my prologue, don't you? Or... perhaps not. Either way, you're going to get it. So here it is:

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Prologue

Unease in Aelsu

He was tall. He was dark. He was Auger Edmeire. He had come for Aelsu.

Leanne stepped out of the boat to the rocky beach to stand beside her husband. She smiled, her teeth flashing in the pale moonlight. “It is a fine place, my husband,” she murmured, “a fitting kingdom for you.”

Auger smiled. “And for you, my love,” he said.

Leanne nodded and turned back to the boat. “Aracora—bring your things. We're going now.”

A young woman took a sack of things from the boat and rolled her eyes, which shone blue in the moonlight. Her black hair was streaked with red, and her skin an attractive tan. She smiled. “We're coming, Aelsu. You better be ready.” Aracora threw her head back and laughed.

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Far across Aelsu, to deep in Lia Forest, an old woman awoke from her sleep. What is it? she asked God silently.

They are coming, Rayeh, His voice resonated deep within her.

Rayeh sat up. What can I do, my King?

Warn them. The Voice said, then it was gone. Rayeh frowned and stood. She packed quickly, then went out and saddled her horse. She mounted the horse and kicked it into a gallop. Maybe she would reach them in time. They'd stop the catastrophe that lurked.

Their troubles were only beginning.

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I'll leave you there. Feel free to comment with a long list of critics, or just your thought on it. Thank you for reading!

-Author

Maps

Maps! How could you write a novel without them? :) So, today, dear readers, I will share a few of my maps with you. No copying, now.
My current story takes place in the world of Alleure, on the island of Aelsu. I don't actually have a map of Alleure, so I'll just post the maps I have of place in Alleure. Namely, Lisserai and Aelsu.
This is Aelsu:

And this is Lisserai:

So that's only two maps. You'll have to deal with the disappointment, especially since it took so long to get me to post. Oh well. :)

For the Everlasting King of Kings!
-Author